Are these poems good? can you give me some more ideas for some new ones?
i wrote these poems and i want to know if you think they’re good. also, i need another idea for a poem to write. if you have any ideas, please share.
once upon a time………….
not now, never been, never could, never end,
a day wasted, running till then,
gone today, back again,
never remember, never known,
could have been, couldn’t be, never was,
always will be, always ending,
till tomorrow’s today, and today’s yesterday,
once again, it has never been
remembering a time once upon us,
a figment of imagination in us,
you can remember times before life of yourself,
with one thought you remember, fading now , and it never was,
its gone now, never was,
was it, or was it not
remembering, or thought
today’s tomorrow is always a day away, and yesterday’s today,
one day before wave, tide of crashing,
over the time, once upon a time………………..
they say the best things in life are unseen,
which is why we close our eyes when we kiss, cry, and dream,
a kiss, a time we share with those we love, a first, a second, a third,
all the same passion, the best thing in life, eyes closed, unseen……
a cry, impossible for eyes to be open, a time to let all your emotions free,
the best thing in life, unseen………
a dream, sometimes good, sometimes bad, always relaxing, never understood,
your eyes always closed, pleasantness arises,
the best thing in life, unseen…..
They were both good but the second one was more poweful and stuck in my mind mostly because its actually true. I like your style in the first one. Its very intersting if you read it carefully. It expresses alot. Really good. If you write anymore, please email to me because im really intersted in hearing more of your work.
An idea for another poem is talking about death in some shape or form. I think you would be able to handle that topic beautifully.
George W. Bush Quotes?
All quotes 100% authentic, and courtesey of George W. Bush.
"I think we can agree. The past is over."
"I have learned from mistakes I may or may not have made."
"It was just inebreating what the Midlands was all about then." (A slip on exhillerating)
"It’s clearly the budget. It has a lot of numbers on it."
"The most important job is not to be governor, or first lady in my case."
"Will highways on the internet become more few?"
"Like your neighbor just like you like to be liked yourself."
"Rarely is the question asked: Is our children learning? Laura and I really don’t realize just how bright our children is."
"I was raised in the West. The West of Texas. It’s pretty close to California. More so than Washington, D.C. is close to California."
"I propose that every city have a telephone number 119 — for dyslexics who have an emergency."
"There ought to be limits to freedom." Said about parody websites of him.
"I believe that we are on an irreversible trent toward democracy and more freedom- but that could change."
"One word sums up probably the responsibility of any governor, and that one word is ‘to be prepared.’"
"Verbosity leads to unclear, inarticulate things."
"I have made good judgements in the past. I have made good judgements in the future."
"A low voter turnout is an indication of fewer people going to the poles."
"Illegitimacy is something we should talk about, in terms of not having it."
"We are ready for any unseen event that may or may not occur."
"For NASA, space is still a high priority."
"We have a firm committment to NATO; we are a part of NATO. We have a firm committment to Europe; we are a part of Europe."
"Who is to blame for riots? The rioters are to blame."
"The Holocaust was an obscene period in our nation’s history. I mean in this century’s history. But we all lived in this century. I didn’t live in this century."
"Quite frankly, teachers are the only proffession that teach our children."
"It isn’t pollution that’s ruining the environment; it’s all the impurities in the air and water that’s doing it."
"It’s time the human race entered the solar system."
Can I ask you something? How did that guy become president? I am still laughing from that. Two thumbs up for you
What is the name of this horror/thriller movie? Please help.?
It was about a mother, father, daughter and brother. They were traveling on a deserted road for the holidays. They made a wrong turn and got lost in very bad weather. We see the family being chased by an unseen force. But, it was a twist. In the end, we find out that the family had all died in a car crash before hand. The unseen force was death. The family was fighting death from the car crash. Eventually, each family member was hunted down and caught by the unseen force in the same order and manner that they died in the crash. What was the title of this movie?
Dead End
Dear Atheists do you still question why Almighty is unseen ?
In our day to day life we are well versed with the fact that any person who truly does something noble or good for the mankind would insist on not coming to limelight and remain modest for his actions of kindness. Then is it not foolish on part of certain people who say that they do not believe in Almighty just because they cannot see him ? Almighty is the creator of this Universe and all that lies in it. The most magnificient act . How do they then expect him to be pompous about the same and just show himself up when he is most perfect and infinitely greater in all good virtues that can be found in any good human being because he himself is the creator of those virtues found in any good human being. Thus, if a good human being can be modest about his deeds, it goes without saying that Almighty being infinitely superior in virtues than his creation would be unseen. What are your views on this ?
Blessed are the ones who have’nt seen God yet believe in him!!!
Could there be an as yet unseen flaw with Hawk-Eye?..Consider the following possibility.?
How would Hawk-Eye designate a serve as either in,or out,if the ball lands on the service line but is adjacent to the middle court service line?(the T section).Without any thinly drawn through lines how can Hawk-Eye show if the ball is close enough to be in,or either called out,for being wide? There are no thin lines drawn to show the continuation of the width of the middle line through to the back of the cross court service line.
I reckon it would be a very interesting scenario if a player challenged an umpires call because of this anomaly becoming apparent.Just imagine the players rage if this happened during Match Point?
So far I don’t think this Hawk-Eye situation has ever occurred.
"BRING IT ON!!!!!!!"
I think that Hawk-eye is a fantastic innovation to tennis.
But the other night in one of the mens game…I think Djockovic challenged a call in the Quarter Final against Hewwit and the ball was in by 1 SINGLE MILLIMETER!
the bad this about that is that surley, there must be some margin of error in the Hark-eye system, no computer is perfect.
it may have been in by a couple of millimeters but then again, it may have been OUT by a couple of millimeters….thats the thing that people also have to understand. just because it says its in doesnt mean it is.
I remember a couple of years ago when they new hawk eye was braught into the australian cricket on ch. 9….the commentators said that there was up to a 3mm margin of error.
sometimes the hawk eye will get it spot on…but it can be out sometimes.
Yes, umpires have overruled linesman’s decision then players have challenged the chair umpires decision and hawk eye has shown that the linesman was correct….devistating for the chair umpire
as for match point….well, i wouldnt like to see a player win because of a computer prediction
" The Audacity of Hope " A meaningless term for child-like Americans ?
I’m not knocking Barack, just the Madison Avenue approach to selling a dead institution: The presidency. Millions of Americans grasp at The Audacity of Hope, a meaningless marketing slogan of the publishing industry if ever there was one. At least it has the word Audacity in it, something millions of folks are having trouble conjuring up the least shred of, these days. And there is good old fashioned "Hope" of course — that murky, undefined belief that some unknown force or magical unseen power will reverse the national condition — and deliver us from what every bit of evidence indicates is irreversible: Collapse. Political, economical, ecolological exhaustion.
Man that is the best question I’ve seen in awhile! You are totally right about the marketing slogans that are thrown out in the name of votes. If only Americans would wake up and realize that it’s Wall Street that runs this country and not the president.
"The Audacity of Hope" is a Smoke and Mirrors attempt at a sympathetic response for votes. "The Audacity of Hope" are just words that imply that to Hope is somehow special and covert, but are really no different than the old McDonald’s slogan, "You Deserve a Break Today" or "Tippecanoe and Tyler Too". Just Words.
Audacity means "Bold or insolent, heedlessness of restraints, as of those imposed by prudence, propriety, or convention." Thus audacity is a special word reserved for people like Spartacus, not some Knob running for president.
I submit that the following lines from the old Blues tune "When the Levee Breaks" by Kansas Joe McCoy and Memphis Minnie, are a good counter response to the phrase "The Audacity of Hope"
Cryin’ won’t help ya
Prayin’ won’t do ya no good
Cryin’ won’t help ya
Prayin’ won’t do ya no good
When the levee breaks
mama you got to move.
(Yes, Led Zeppelin did a cover.)
Jesus is unseen and so is flying spaghetti monster?
So why is it that people believe in Jesus but don’t believe in flying spaghetti monster?? Neither have any evidence of their existence.
The bible clearly proves that Jesus is real…
The Unseen Hand – Acappella version
The Unseen Hand. A classic hymn that is absolutely beautiful.
There is an unseen hand to me,
That leads through ways I cannot see
While going through this world of woe,
This hand still leads, where’er I go
Im holding to, the unseen hand,
That guides me through this weary land
And some sweet day Ill take my stand,
Still holding to the unseen hand
His hand has led through shadows drear
And while it leads I have no fear
I know twill lead, me to that home
Where sin nor sorrow ere can come
Im holding to, the unseen hand,
That guides me through this weary land
And some sweet day Ill take my stand,
Still holding to the unseen hand
I long to see, my Saviors face
And tell the story saved by grace
And there upon that golden strand
I’ll praise him for his guiding hand
Im holding to, the unseen hand,
That guides me through this weary land
And some sweet day Ill take my stand,
Still holding to the unseen hand
Im holding to, the unseen hand,
That guides me through this weary land
And some sweet day Ill take my stand,
Still holding to the unseen hand
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Unseen James Hetfield
James Hetfield guitars version 4
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Hetfield has been a major endorser of ESP guitars since 1991, and is best known for playing custom-made Explorer-style guitars with an EMG 81/EMG 60 set for pickups. His popularization of the models was considered by some to be a catalyst in Gibson’s decision to sue ESP over loss of profits (Gibson originated the model in the late 1950s and has allowed other companies to build replicas). Hetfield’s main guitar from the early days was a white Flying V, used almost exclusively until it broke in 1987. After that he used a 1984 white Gibson Explorer bearing Metallica “Jump In The Fire” devil custom artwork as well as the words “EET FUK” and an ‘85 White Gibson Explorer. In 1988 he switched to using white and black ESP Explorer models.
During the mid-1990s, James Hetfield also used his two signature ESP Flying V models, one with red flames and one with green flames. He also asked a friend to fix black and silver diamond-plated metal onto the surface of some of his ESP Explorer guitars.
Recently Hetfield has become a frequent user of a Gibson Les Paul Custom, particularly the 1973 model.
James Hetfield is a true-blue guitar tinkerer, whose experiments, placements of stickers and modifications have resulted in the production of signature models by ESP guitars. He bought a black ESP ltd Viper baritone 300, installed an EMG Afterburner booster circuit, and asked a friend of his to paint green flames on it. This resulted in the limited edition “The Grynch” model guitar. He splashed some Killrust grey paint on an ESP Eclipse model guitar, installed EMG 81 & 60 pickups, moved the toggle switch to a lower position- which resulted in the signature model ESP “Truckster” guitar.
He also uses a two custom-made Explorer model guitars, built by bass luthier Ken Lawrence. Occasionally, James will use Kirk’s electric guitars in the studio, in particular his Fender Stratocasters and Telecasters, as well as his Tom Anderson ProAmm (which was used for the clean guitar intro of “Enter Sandman”). * ESP M-II “Zorlac”. This was the starting line for the whole KH series. It features veritcal skull & crossbones opposed to the horizontal ones featured on todays KH’s, and an upside down Jackson Guitars style headstock which is what Kirk originaly intended. However, Jackson Guitars was not thrilled about this, and threatened law suits if this model ever hit stores. So the headstock was changed to a typical ESP but flipped upside down. Picture Picture * ESP KH-2 (Main touring guitar) Kirk’s signature model guitar is based upon the modifications he made to his M-II. (Nicknamed “Skully” because of the skull and crossbone inlays) Picture * ESP KH-2 M-II – Boris Karloff Mummy I graphic (Kirk’s favorite guitar. Kirk owns the rights to the image on it and it will NOT be released by ESP.Picture * ESP KH-2 M-II – Ouija. This guitar contains 2 spelling errors on it. It sports the words “WILLIAM FUED TALKING BAARD SET” but it in fact should say “WILLIAM FULD TALKING BOARD SET”
Picture * ESP KH-2 M-II – Boris Karloff Mummy II graphic. Same as the Mummy I but with heiroglyph inlays. Picture
Picture * ESP KH-2 M-II “Fuck You” KH-4. It’s the same as a typical KH-2, but with a pearloid pickguard, dot inlays, a Roland midi unit (for roland vg8/vg88), and the words “FUCK YOU” written at the 12th fret. Picture * ESP ESP MII Skully 7 String. Though it belongs to Kirk, James mainly used it in the studio for St. Anger. It doesn’t go on tour, rather than stays home with Kirk. Picture * ESP KH-3 Eclipse – Pushead Spider graphic. It is taken from a classic les paul jr. shape with floyd rose and EMG pickups. Picture * Gibson Les Paul Custom 1968 also known as “Black Beauty”; Kirk also uses regular Les Pauls at some performances Picture * Jackson Randy Rhoads Model RR1T custom made from the shop specifically for Kirk Picture * ESP KH-1 Flying V Picture * ESP WaveCaster Blue- Wave Machine (Only 3 in existence.) Picture * Fender Stratocaster 1998 – American black and green Stratocaster * 1974 Gibson Flying V (Used mainly for recording the first four albums. In 1989 he replaced the stock pickups with EMG 81s. Was the third guitar he ever owned.)Picture
Kirk Hammett’s first guitar was a cheap Montgomery Strat copy. The pickups had gold aluminum foil on them, and there wasn’t even a name on the headstock.
Metallica’s “St. Anger” DVD rehearsals features a new guitar which has “Invisible Kid” written on it, which he uses in the song “Invisible Kid”
Kirk uses ibanez guitars too
ESP New Style EX (JH-4)
ESP Custom Eclipse
ESP LTD F300FM
ESP LTD F300 Black
ESP Custom F 7-String Flame Inlays
ESP Custom F 7-String Cross Inlays
ESP LTD Black Cherry H207 7-String
ESP LTD F 7-String Skully Inlays
ESP Custom F Cross Inlays
ESP Custom F “Papa Het”
james also have a gibson es-1275(sg double neck)
jakson king v
cool video/clips of metallica
http://www.youtube.com/user/metallicaddict13
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The Unseen – False Hope @ Warped San Antonio
Kicking in unseen mosh at warped San Antonio / Selma, Tx.
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