In a poetry response, do you have to write/talk about the last line?

Posted on July 28th, 2011 by admin in unseen line | 1 Comment »

When writing a response to a poem, weather it is a comparison, or an unseen poem, do you have to write about the last line?

You talk about the poem, the poem has a last line, so you can address it as part of the poem OR stick it out on its own and discuss.

What do you think about my poem i wrote?

Posted on July 24th, 2011 by admin in hope unseen | 5 Comments »

the name of the poem is called who Am I

am i the childless child who don’t got no hope for a better future? you come here bomb us and kill us while telling the people you are here to liberate us. From what the oil we have and you need to run your country? Am i the next generation of targets who you call enemy’s of the people who are now trying to free its people? From the corrupted regimes you put in it places to oppress us? When or if i become a teenager would i become another
victim of this unseen war which is called liberation.?

Well I think at one point in time we all feel this way. So the poem will definitely make an impact on many people. But can you answer this one? When has the War Really ended?
From as along as I can remember there always has been war. It just depends on how we look at the World. World War one, World War 2, The Genocide under the Nazis, The cold war, The Gulf war, The Korean War, I could just go on and on, but you see my point the War has never really ended.
We have war all over the world. It comes basically from Hatred and Racism. We just can’t get along no matter how we see things. So as for your poem it does hit on many points in life and it could be good if you make some adjustments to it.

What is the significance of Barbara Jennings’ purchase of a 19-inch color television for $1500?

Posted on July 20th, 2011 by admin in hope unseen | 1 Comment »

This question is based on the novel "A Hope in the Unseen".

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