Comments on: Are these poems good? can you give me some more ideas for some new ones?

By: ♥Half Blood Princess♥

♥Half Blood Princess♥ — Mon, 08 Feb 2010 09:29:59 +0000

They were both good but the second one was more poweful and stuck in my mind mostly because its actually true. I like your style in the first one. Its very intersting if you read it carefully. It expresses alot. Really good. If you write anymore, please email to me because im really intersted in hearing more of your work. An idea for another poem is talking about death in some shape or form. I think you would be able to handle that topic beautifully.
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By: Esmerelda Y

Esmerelda Y — Mon, 08 Feb 2010 09:15:59 +0000

I like both of them, but my only thing is I've heard a quote about something like 'the best things are unseen, like when we kiss, cry, and dream' before. I'm pretty sure I have.
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By: Olivia

Olivia — Mon, 08 Feb 2010 08:31:59 +0000

The first one gave me a bit of a headache; it’s like a massive jumble of conundrums.

I really like the second one.
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I’m a writer too, but I haven’t gotten anything published yet.