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The Unseen:
Trapped in a cage with an open door,
Safety is all that is seen,
Curiosity crosses the mind but,
Better be safe then in pain.
That’s all that’s seen,
No glory can be shed through the shadows
Just because it cannot be seen,
Does not mean it is not real.

though short, is this a great or good poem, improvements are welcome. thank you

why not

3 Responses

1. rghvn-bookwormcrazy Says:
   March 7th, 2010 at 9:37 am

   Sure u shd publish ur poems like this one which is very interesting. I feel u will become a good poet. Congratulations.
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2. The Modern Day Poe Says:
   March 7th, 2010 at 9:51 am

   why not
   References :
   http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Av.rw_Wyo0M2lqCQnjL0EbXsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20100131202134AAE6nhN

3. loudgrape Says:
   March 7th, 2010 at 10:33 am

   definitely.
   References :
   http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AvhEi5ny3WBTJ3vcKxAyQxDsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20100201000908AA1TzLq

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