What made you go insane?
Does the world got you going mad
No matter the good you do everything still goes bad
Feel like life itself is your worst enemy
Betrayed the devil and God, then you don’t know me
I walk through the halls while they all point and stare
And if not for my wallet, I bet they wouldn’t really care
People laughing at me because of what I say
Its how I feel and still they call me gay
I talk of the horrors of the world and what we can do
No religious values, not preaching, but can’t get through
Girls dissing because I’m not the hottest guy
Saying I’m nothing but white trash, and I still ask God why
Was I cursed to roam the earth to dissed by all humanity
While I see the truth while they live in so much profanity
Media controls the minds of the children to what they think
Telling that life is all pretty, with sparkles, rainbows and pink
Why was I created to get hurt and feel as this pain
Why was I choosen to actually use my brain
Does the world got you going mad
No matter the good you do everything still goes bad
Feel like life itself is your worst enemy
Betrayed the devil and God, then you don’t know me
Everyone wanting money from the damn government
Rapist get off scott free, the stuff we should repent
Greed controlling these United States of America with its reach
Is freedom still here, do we have the right of freedom of speech
To many one sided bastards, too blind to look at my of view
As I continue to on in this life while the ladies scream "Ewww"
I’ve learned about the most horrid of things, so much unseen
I’ve gone crazy because of reality and I’m only 15
You can say I’m diluonal but the fact will still remain
While listen to your "Jonas Brothers" I’m still insane
So if you wanna diss or cuss me out, I won’t turn red
Because I know you can’t diss when your missing your head
So I went back to school with my story to tell
And killed those bastards who deserved to burn in hell
Does the world got you going mad
No matter the good you do everything still goes bad
Feel like life itself is your worst enemy
Betrayed the devil and God, then you don’t know me
The Midwest Arsonist
That was very amusing, kudos.
I loved this part:
Was I cursed to roam the earth to dissed by all humanity
While I see the truth while they live in so much profanity
Media controls the minds of the children to what they think
Telling that life is all pretty, with sparkles, rainbows and pink
Why was I created to get hurt and feel as this pain
Why was I choosen to actually use my brain
There are a few words (dissing, eww) which I don’t typically use yet they work rather well with the flow of this piece.
I hope you continue to write.
March 7th, 2010 at 9:57 am
hey don’t go and kill anyone ok?
i really think you have talent!
just a few tweeks such as you use the word diss a little much
is this a song cuz the repetition is sorta like a chorus
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March 7th, 2010 at 10:07 am
wow, good poem (song)!
i`m feeling like that alot lately…
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March 7th, 2010 at 10:56 am
That was very amusing, kudos.
I loved this part:
Was I cursed to roam the earth to dissed by all humanity
While I see the truth while they live in so much profanity
Media controls the minds of the children to what they think
Telling that life is all pretty, with sparkles, rainbows and pink
Why was I created to get hurt and feel as this pain
Why was I choosen to actually use my brain
There are a few words (dissing, eww) which I don’t typically use yet they work rather well with the flow of this piece.
I hope you continue to write.
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March 7th, 2010 at 11:18 am
Bravo, bravo! More talented work.
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